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Laila
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Posted - 07 April 2005 :  11:27:23  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
Hey people...
just wrote some shair myself.. just wanted to share them with u guys..

PLZ give comments on them.. i want to know what u think..


Here is one poem i wrote when i was in bed, looking out my window...


Upar dekha to nazar aye sitare our eik khoobsurat chamak bara chand...
Eik pal ke liye aisa laga ke chand aap hai, our sitare hum..
Aap ke ghulaam...



Here is one i wrote when i was sitting in the sun yesterday...


Kitni khoobsurat hai yeh suraj ki dhoob..
Jab bhi is dhoob mei bait ti hou,
aap ki yaad ati hai...
woh lamhe jo hum ne saath guzare...
wohi purane din, wohi aap ka purana style..
Phir yaad ata hai keh jo lamhe beed geye so beed geye...



Here is one i just wrote...


Eik bohut khoubsurat sitara nazar aya,
chamakta chamakta mere paas aya,
paas a kar kehne laga,
u r so naughty Laila...

Here is one i wrote today...

Ab to aap ka ana jana rahe gha...
kabhie to ruk jao..
do pal ke liye hamare saath raho,
hamme akela na chor keh jao...


PLZ TELL WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT IT...
AND REMEMBER IM A NEW POETESS..


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

Edited by - Laila on 16 April 2005 17:11:04

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Aasman ki Ladki
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Posted - 07 April 2005 :  16:54:30  Show Profile  Visit Aasman ki Ladki's Homepage  Reply with Quote
nice jee ,...
mein b khud shairy karti hoon..
nazumz lambhi lambhi lekin woh masti mein nahin likhu ghi sara dk chora ley ghay lolzz


Khuwaab dekhne ke liye hote hain..
Un mein jah kar mager raha na karo.....'




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Aryaan
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Posted - 07 April 2005 :  20:34:21  Show Profile  Visit Aryaan's Homepage  Reply with Quote
Nice Laila...


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akalmand ladki
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Posted - 07 April 2005 :  21:57:07  Show Profile  Visit akalmand ladki's Homepage  Reply with Quote
Nice...

Bewafa zamaane mein pyar doondne waalo pyar kaise milta hai yeh to jaanlooo...mitti ki moorat mein,bholi bhaali soorat mein pyar kaise milta hai yeh to jaanlo pahley....

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Laila
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Posted - 08 April 2005 :  11:27:24  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
hey thx for liking my shairi...


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

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saba
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Posted - 08 April 2005 :  18:14:40  Show Profile  Visit saba's Homepage  Click to see saba's MSN Messenger address  Send saba a Yahoo! Message  Reply with Quote
hmmm very very nice jii


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Paijal
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Posted - 08 April 2005 :  18:52:51  Show Profile  Visit Paijal's Homepage  Reply with Quote
very very nice...
i like them both!



*Made By Laila*

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Miss Cool
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Posted - 08 April 2005 :  22:19:32  Show Profile  Visit Miss Cool's Homepage  Reply with Quote
NiiiCe.. U r good 2 that yaaaaar... =D




LuuuB YaaaH JaY ..

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Laila
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Posted - 09 April 2005 :  15:10:56  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
Ha ha miss cool.. im new.. thats my first 2 poem.. :D


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

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desi_dhamaka
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Posted - 09 April 2005 :  17:19:04  Show Profile  Visit desi_dhamaka's Homepage  Send desi_dhamaka an ICQ Message  Click to see desi_dhamaka's MSN Messenger address  Reply with Quote
Wah G wah....
Abh to mushairi ka muqabla hona cahiye=P




*~~ÿëh Ðünî¥å, ÿëh Mëhƒîl, Më®ë Kååm Kî Nåhî~~*




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Laila
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Posted - 10 April 2005 :  19:10:25  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
haha... abhi mai itni teiz nahi...


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

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Miss Cool
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Posted - 10 April 2005 :  19:50:10  Show Profile  Visit Miss Cool's Homepage  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Laila

Ha ha miss cool.. im new.. thats my first 2 poem.. :D



Fir wee... Very cool sis:D





LuuuB YaaaH JaY ..

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Laila
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Posted - 11 April 2005 :  09:38:31  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
thx... i have made one more.. will post it later....


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

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Miss Cool
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Posted - 12 April 2005 :  22:20:28  Show Profile  Visit Miss Cool's Homepage  Reply with Quote
Hahaha lolzzz.. nr 3 iz cool:D




LuuuB YaaaH JaY ..

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Laila
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Posted - 13 April 2005 :  17:28:02  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
ha ha.. couldnt find anything else to write.. he he so just wrote that..


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

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Miss Cool
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Posted - 13 April 2005 :  20:25:54  Show Profile  Visit Miss Cool's Homepage  Reply with Quote
Hehehe.. Fir wee.. Itz cool =D

Oyee, sistaa.. lær mig oz li d der..!





LuuuB YaaaH JaY ..

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Laila
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Posted - 14 April 2005 :  11:50:06  Show Profile  Visit Laila's Homepage  Reply with Quote
lær hvad?? at skrive digte?


Made it myself.. If u want a sig, than pm me..

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