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Laila
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 Posted - 07 April 2005 : 11:27:23
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Hey people...
just wrote some shair myself.. just wanted to share them with u guys..
PLZ give comments on them.. i want to know what u think..
Here is one poem i wrote when i was in bed, looking out my window...
Upar dekha to nazar aye sitare our eik khoobsurat chamak bara chand...
Eik pal ke liye aisa laga ke chand aap hai, our sitare hum..
Aap ke ghulaam...
Here is one i wrote when i was sitting in the sun yesterday...
Kitni khoobsurat hai yeh suraj ki dhoob..
Jab bhi is dhoob mei bait ti hou,
aap ki yaad ati hai...
woh lamhe jo hum ne saath guzare...
wohi purane din, wohi aap ka purana style..
Phir yaad ata hai keh jo lamhe beed geye so beed geye...
Here is one i just wrote...
Eik bohut khoubsurat sitara nazar aya,
chamakta chamakta mere paas aya,
paas a kar kehne laga,
u r so naughty Laila...
Here is one i wrote today...
Ab to aap ka ana jana rahe gha...
kabhie to ruk jao..
do pal ke liye hamare saath raho,
hamme akela na chor keh jao...
PLZ TELL WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT IT...
AND REMEMBER IM A NEW POETESS..
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Edited by - Laila on 16 April 2005 17:11:04
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Aasman ki Ladki
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Posted - 07 April 2005 : 16:54:30
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nice jee ,...
mein b khud shairy karti hoon..
nazumz lambhi lambhi lekin woh masti mein nahin likhu ghi sara dk chora ley ghay lolzz
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Khuwaab dekhne ke liye hote hain..
Un mein jah kar mager raha na karo.....'
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Aryaan
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 Posted - 07 April 2005 : 20:34:21
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Nice Laila...
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akalmand ladki
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Posted - 07 April 2005 : 21:57:07
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Nice...
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| Bewafa zamaane mein pyar doondne waalo pyar kaise milta hai yeh to jaanlooo...mitti ki moorat mein,bholi bhaali soorat mein pyar kaise milta hai yeh to jaanlo pahley.... |
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Laila
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Posted - 08 April 2005 : 11:27:24
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hey thx for liking my shairi...
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saba
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Posted - 08 April 2005 : 18:14:40
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hmmm very very nice jii
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Paijal
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Posted - 08 April 2005 : 18:52:51
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very very nice...
i like them both!
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*Made By Laila*
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Miss Cool
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Posted - 08 April 2005 : 22:19:32
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NiiiCe.. U r good 2 that yaaaaar... =D
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LuuuB YaaaH JaY .. |
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Laila
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Posted - 09 April 2005 : 15:10:56
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Ha ha miss cool.. im new.. thats my first 2 poem.. :D
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desi_dhamaka
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Posted - 09 April 2005 : 17:19:04
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Wah G wah....
Abh to mushairi ka muqabla hona cahiye=P
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*~~ÿëh Ðünî¥å, ÿëh Mëhƒîl, Më®ë Kååm Kî Nåhî~~*
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Laila
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Posted - 10 April 2005 : 19:10:25
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haha... abhi mai itni teiz nahi...
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Miss Cool
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Posted - 10 April 2005 : 19:50:10
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quote:
Originally posted by Laila
Ha ha miss cool.. im new.. thats my first 2 poem.. :D
Fir wee... Very cool sis:D
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Laila
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Posted - 11 April 2005 : 09:38:31
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thx... i have made one more.. will post it later....
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Miss Cool
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Posted - 12 April 2005 : 22:20:28
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Hahaha lolzzz.. nr 3 iz cool:D
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Laila
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Posted - 13 April 2005 : 17:28:02
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ha ha.. couldnt find anything else to write.. he he so just wrote that..
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Miss Cool
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Posted - 13 April 2005 : 20:25:54
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Hehehe.. Fir wee.. Itz cool =D
Oyee, sistaa.. lær mig oz li d der..!
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Laila
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Posted - 14 April 2005 : 11:50:06
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lær hvad?? at skrive digte?
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